Sunwalker wrote:@Illustrious Q: How it was working with Dawn and Ian? :D
SurrealBrain wrote:I like the story, but it feels like I skipped a few or so pages. This timeline isn't right? Wait, what now? Not necessarily complaining about the line itself, but the fact that we don't have any context for it at the moment. We might get it later, though. Besides, you're all doing a good job so far.
Sunwalker wrote:SurrealBrain wrote:I like the story, but it feels like I skipped a few or so pages. This timeline isn't right? Wait, what now? Not necessarily complaining about the line itself, but the fact that we don't have any context for it at the moment. We might get it later, though. Besides, you're all doing a good job so far.
The bats and the avians are enemies, however all of a sudden they are getting along together. Xixa is the Guardian of Time and she has knowledge about what happened/happens/will happen in the past, present and future, so she knew that something is wrong. However it is needed to read the characters and story pages in the site to get it which, if you ask me, is a clever way to get people to read those infos ;).
SurrealBrain wrote:Well, that makes it a little better (I didn't know that), but the fact that it's All There in the Manual (or character pages and such, in this case) and not in the actual comic is, in my opinion, a bit of a problem in, and of itself, since there are people who won't even think to read those (as you can see, that seems to have include myself). But again, at least we have a means to get some context. I still hope the next three pages end with something like "Let me tell you how things were before." You're free to disagree with me, of course.
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