The Unexpected Blessing (a Kung Fu Panda short-series)

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The Unexpected Blessing (a Kung Fu Panda short-series)

Postby TheFatPanda » Tue May 15, 2012 1:45 pm

A fanfic of a non-BumbleKing related universe. Has that ever been done before? :P

This is sort of a collab between me and my good friend NazcaPilot: I wrote the story, but Nazca is the one responsible for the overall concept.

Enjoy!!

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I’ve always been quick on my feet, but not even I could keep up with how fast everything was going.

The river through Gong Men City was being blocked solid by the violent chaos that had ensued ahead of us. Our boats where all screeching to a halt, bumping one by one into the other, almost throwing me off my balance: so many of my pack where up front getting their faces pounded inward by China’s legendary warriors, the Furious Five, the Kung Fu Council, all under of the leadership of the Dragon Warrior. Plushie.

“Fire!! Fire at them!!” that crazy bird was giving me an earache, I stood and looked on as my pack fought in vein against the kung fu warriors, a flaming torch in hand, ready to fire the canon.
“But sir, we’ll kill our own!!”
“I said FIRE AT THEM!! FIRE!!”

He wants me to take out our allies? My pack…?

“No.”

After that, everything just went blank. The last thing I remember seeing is the face of my master, Lord Shen, as it began to gleam a murderous glow…

The only hint to my current situation was a sharp pain digging into my neck, the rest of my body felt almost desensitized. Despite the discomforting pain in my neck, I felt oddly relaxed.
I didn’t think I would ever be opening my remaining eye again, and yet, a vague light was making itself known to my vision. Was I dead? Was this my passing? No, this was sunlight.
I began to regain feeling in my body again; the first thing I felt was a damp sensation, all over me, like I’d just been dunked in a bath. Everything felt smothered in something soft and slightly scratchy, something warm…but scratchy, very scratchy.
I felt something constricting my neck. I instinctively made my first movement, lifting my arm from under the soft scratchy thing to get a feel of what was half-strangling me.
Several strips of something rough, I could feel, slightly sticky too.

“Oh, thank goodness”

I was slightly started when the sound of a woman’s voice spoke up, a soft voice that could melt butter.

“I’m so relieved to see you awake at last”

I pushed myself up, off of what looked like at first sight, a bamboo sofa, and I looked down at the foot of it at the source of the voice: a short, fluffy rabbit, holding in her stubby arms a bowl of soup.

She smiled at me caringly. It’s been a while since anybody last looked at me like that…

“Where…” I gasped out a single word before realizing I could barely speak, my vibrating vocal cords caused another painful twinge to shoot down my throat.

“Take it easy on your voice…” the rabbit softly warned me, “I don’t know how you gained that nasty cut, but it’s a good thing it was too low down to cause any serious harm”.

“A cut…?” wait, that’s right, after I defied Shens order, that sadistic psychopath flung a blade at me, got me right here…I remember now.

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More coming soon.
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Re: The Unexpected Blessing (a Kung Fu Panda short-series)

Postby rkfan23 » Tue May 15, 2012 5:30 pm

I have bit of hunch that you're a Kung-Fu Panda fan... I think I'm on to something.

Nice story, Panda.
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Re: The Unexpected Blessing (a Kung Fu Panda short-series)

Postby TheFatPanda » Mon May 21, 2012 3:26 pm

Part 2

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The rabbit offered me the bowl of soup she was holding: a tomatoey cent wafted up from the bowl, and that alone was enough to entice me.

“Thank…you…” I grabbed the bowl, I held it in my lap as she stared at me, like she was waiting for me to take my first sip “So where is this anyway?”

“You’re in Gēn Shǐ Valley”.

I’ve never heard of this place before...how far am I from Gong Men City?

“I found you washed up on the riverside, the river that flows directly from the canals of Gong Men City to be precise. Is that where you’re from?”

She suddenly springs a look on her small face like a penny just dropped on her head.

“That was where that huge battle took place recently...a nasty peacock called…Shun yu? No…”

“Shen?”

“Oh that’s right. He tried to take over China, but he was defeated by the Dragon Warrior.”

So Plushie did it after all... I wonder what he did to the bird. Did he get thrown in jail; did Plushie dispose of him permanently? No, no Dragon Warrior of any kind would resort to shanking someone…at least not on purpose…

“When I found you in that river, you where in such a terrible state, I was almost convinced you wouldn’t make it, but I’m not the sort to give up on somebody in bad health, no matter how close they are to death’s door.”

I…didn’t know what to say. She helped me, nobody has ever been so generous…I’ve never deserved it.

“Oh my…are you one of them?”

I thunder jolt bolted up my spine: crap, is she on to me?

“…you must be one of the brave warriors: the Dragon Warriors comrade?”

The jolt sank back down to my rear: she hasn’t figured it out, that’s good enough, but…the absurdity of what she just came out with, me, the Dragon Warrior’s ally? My track record suggests a much different story, but for now, it’s not the story I want told.

“That’s right…I battled fiercely alongside the Dragon Warrior, the Furious Five, and the Kung Fu Council. But I fell before the last bell, that crazy peacock caught me off guard”.

“A valiant kung fu warrior, and under my roof!? Please tell me your name…”

“I’m…”

Wait, what am I doing? I can’t use my real name. She may not recognise me by my face, but names speak louder than looks.

Ji Hui. My name is Ji Hui” …it was the best I could come up with.

“What a nice name: Master Ji Hui”

“Well, I’m not much of a master…” I may have lied my way into her good books, but I can’t claim to be a master considering my alignment: even I have to keep my respect towards the true masters, whether I hate their guts or not.

“Your soup is getting cold…”

Oh, my nose somehow became desensitized to the delicious smell of tomato soup as I put all my focus into putting out that convincing lie. I took the bowl right up to my face and took a sip: I’d left it just long enough for it to become tepid. I took the bowl down and I was met with her pleased expression: she didn’t seem to care that I rudely drank straight from the bowl, she just seemed happy that I was enjoying it.

“This is very good. Thank you, ah…”

“Oh, how rude of me…”

(Hey, I’m the one drinking straight from the bowl here and you’re calling yourself rude?)

“I am Wren. It’s very nice to make your acquaintance, Ji Hui” she smiled warmly.

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Writers notes:
Gēn Shǐ Valley - Gēn Shǐ literally means "to start a new page". A fitting name for the valley where Wolf Boss is about to start the new page of his life.*
Ji Hui - Means "Chance". Wolfie randomly chose a name which fits best with his new chance to start anew.**
Wren - Means "Charity" or "Mercy". Pretty much speaks for itself.**

*Name chosen by me
**Names chosen by my good friend NazcaPilot
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Re: The Unexpected Blessing (a Kung Fu Panda short-series)

Postby NazcaPilot » Mon May 21, 2012 3:48 pm

I really like what you are doing here, my friend! I think that you have done a good job with all this! I hope that you keep this up for the long haul! :D
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