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So Much More...

Postby TheFatPanda » Sat Dec 24, 2011 6:44 pm

My first fanfic on the BK forums. Well, for now, the first half of it. I was gonna post the whole thing in one go, but I havn't even finished the whole thing yet. And I wanted to get it going at some point around Christmas, considering it's seasonal theme, so what better time than Christmas Eve? Don't hesitate to lend some feedback and constructive critisism if need be (Not that I'm doubting I'll be needing any).

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Year 3263, day 356:

“Things are coming along nicely, if I do say so myself. Not a single conflict has been recorded throughout this year-long interval, the fabric of our little universe is stable, and world order has returned to a peaceful state of mind for one and all.

And yet… I can’t shake that feeling. That empty feeling. I thought that I’d finally grieved out every last drop of sorrow my body could take. But it’s become much more apparent: this is no wound, this is a scar. And scars don’t heal.”

The orange light of the setting sun shined through the window of his study, guided there by the bright surface of the snow that lay elegantly upon the outside streets. The wintery chill that swept through the air had no effect on what was on the other side of the window.
The room was bathed in natural warmth, a chemistry of the sunlight from outside and the body heat of the individual who of which the study belonged.
Even the smallest of humidity was enough to make this particularly portly character shed mild sweat, as the ink he used to form the words on the paper became smudged by the side of his hand as he wrote.
The middle-aged walrus dropped his pen. He looked at the smudgy mess on the paper, before looking over the blackened skin on his hand. He let out a sigh.

A knock sounded at the front door.
“I’m coming” the walrus yelled, as he snapped the logbook shut, and stuffed everything, pen, papers and all, into the desk side drawer.
After pushing his chair in, he waddled out of the study and pulled open the front door.
“How are you, Rotor?” a young female echidna reached in and placed her gloved hand softly on his arm, as the icy chill from outside rolled in past her.
“I’m happy you could make it, Lara-Su” he replied, closing the door behind her briskly.
Lara-Su took a moment to bathe herself in the warmth before Rotor escorted her into the study.
“Coco?”
“How about later? I think we should head down there and back ASAP, before it gets too late.”
Lara-Su finished her sentence before noticing the half-empty mug of coco on the desk, already on the go.
“Then again, there’s no hurry…” she said.
“No, you’re right” Rotor grabbed the mug swiftly, leaving a ring on the desk surface, and threw down the last of the hot beverage, “...besides, it wouldn’t be fair to keep Tails waiting now would it?” he smiled.

Lara-Su waited in the hallway as Rotor turned out the light and shut the door, with the reassuring knowledge that the warmth the room had been blessed with would be waiting for him upon his return.
Rotor walked straight towards the front door, without even thinking to put on his coat, hanging nearby.
“Are you…sure you’re gonna be warm enough in that?
Rotor was wearing nothing but a red, knitted sweater with green rims.
“My body is already suited to this kind of temperature. Did you forget?”
Having originated from the coldest part of the planet, Rotor was more than prepared for any temperature below freezing.
“I guess I did, didn’t I?” Lara-Su chuckled to herself. After taking a moment to retighten her scarf, the two of them set out into the cold, locking the door behind them, sealing the house in near darkness, by this point, with only the slightest glint of orange from outside remaining.

_

One year ago:

Electronic beeping, in a steady sequence: the first thing Rotor could hear. He began to regain consciousness. The muscles in his face went into overdrive, just to do something as effortless as opening his eyes. He was met by a blurry mess as his muscles tugged open his eyelids. His vision took a moment to focus. Although not perfect without his glasses, he could still make out what he was staring at above him: a tiled ceiling, with bright lights.

The beeping continued.

He felt a slight discomfort in his right arm, like something was sticking into it. He could feel that his body was covered in something much silkier than that of his standard black robe, and that his back was nestled into something soft, and yet, his back was throbbing. And there was something sticky clinging to his chest.
With great effort, he pushed himself up, his back twitching with pain. He had found the source of the beeping: a heart monitor standing by his bedside, hooked up to his chest. The light-green room was big, but empty: an entire room just for him.
“Well, talk about luxury…” he uttered under his tried breathe.

Since the room was empty, with nobody around to interact with, Rotor decided to just lie back down and stare at the ceiling, maybe get some more rest. But first, there was the matter of remembering how he got here to attend to.

“Lets see” he thought, “I was alone in that horrible dungeon… and then King Sonic, Tails and Lara-Su where there… and then Knuckles… he helped us escape… that’s right…that’s…right…” he drifted back into a light slumber.

“And Cobar...”

Rotor stirred, as he heard the creaking of a door. Lara-Su walked into the ward, he saw as she breathed a long sigh of relief at seeing him finally awake.
“Thank goodness” she said “How are you holding up?”
“I’m alive. I’d say that’s a start” Rotors gloomy face was brightened up a touch with a welcoming smile.
“Hey, we did it ya know. King Shadow is gone, and as long as the rightful king is around, he won’t be coming back for a very…”

“Where’s Cobar…?” Rotors smile faded, as did Lara-Su’s optimism.

“He’s here in the hospital. Even after what he had put him through, King Shadow still had enough decency to send him to the right place…”

“Please” Rotor slowly lifted his arm, with what little strength he had, to silence her. “You don’t have to pretend. I know that he’s…” Rotor couldn’t bring himself to say the word.

Knowing that she could no longer continue to sugarcoat the truth, Lara-Su pulled up a chair next to Rotors bed, and she slumped down into it with a look of hopelessness.
“My memory of the old world is a little hazy, but Cobar… he was special to you, wasn’t he?”
Rotor lied back into his bed, as his chest began to go tense.
“Whenever I was with that man, I just felt like I was at home, ya know…?”

“He wasn’t just your friend, was he?” Lara-Su knew exactly where the conversation was going, and she didn’t mind.

The conversation was cut short, when an echidna nurse walked into the ward.
“It’s good to finally see you’re awake, Mr. Walrus.”

“Ma’am, I need to know where Cobar is…”

The nurse became hesitant.

“Cobar Echidna, can you tell me where he is?”

“Mr. Walrus… I am truly sorry…”

And with that statement alone, Rotors chest loosened: it felt like everything in his stomach had gone splat against the inside of his belly.

“I want to see him…” he said bluntly.

“Wha…?”

“I want… to see him…

“That’s not possible at this current time. We’re still trying to…”

“I have to see him!!” Rotor grabbed the drip sticking into his arm and ripped it straight from his skin, tore off the patch on his chest, and flung the bed sheets onto the floor, as Lara-Su and the nurse looked on in shock.

“ROTOR, NO!!” Lara-Su screamed, as Rotor fell flat onto the hard, cold floor with a crash loud enough to wake the Nerb King himself.
The nurse ran frantically to his aid, as Lara-Su tried to lift him by the arm, but Rotor was desperate, Rotor struggled to get away from the two woman as much as he could, practically pulling excess strength from thin air at this point. His eyes began to sting with tears, as he continued to yell sorrowfully...

_

Now:

Natural light had faded just enough that it was now time for artificial light to take the torch. The streetlamps lit up one after the other, and the snow-covered walkways of New Mobotropolis glistened under orange spotlights.
Carolers over in the community park nearby belted out festive tunes in celebration of the Winter Solstice, with a lantern each in hand to make their joyful faces visible to those listening and watching in festive spirits.
Watching from further across the park was a certain young two-tailed fox, who was keeping one corner of his eye on the sidewalk.
As he waited, his attention grew more towards the carolers, as he began to zone out, losing his concentration on the sidewalk, trying desperately to take his mind off the cold. He became drowsy, his eyes squinting…
“Tails?”
Tails had snapped out of his trance from hearing Lara-Su’s voice. She and Rotor had shown up without his noticing. Tails laughed awkwardly.

“Hey, you made it…” Tails said.
“It’s good to see you, ol’ pal” Rotor gave Tails a warm brotherly hug.
“Hey, Rote. Listen, Sonic is sorry he couldn’t make it tonight, it’s just that, in the Queens current condition…
“Say no more” Rotor interrupted.
“We better head to the airfield. I’ll call Harry and tell him to start the airship…” Lara-Su began to fondle around in her pocket.
Oh… you already arranged transportation?” Tails said with a slight look of disappointment on his face.

“What did you have in mind?”

“I already went through the trouble of bringing out the old Tornado for old times sake, and you’re telling me you’d rather take public transport? The nerve of it” Tails said jokingly.

That small thing? Sorry Mr. Prower, but I don’t think that fossil could carry the three of us”

“I thought ahead: installed an extra seat. One of you can sit in there, while the other wing walks”.

Lara-Su looked at Rotor; Rotor looked at her, both with uncertainty.

“You’re kidding, right?” Rotor shook his head at Lara-Su’s expression, which could only be described as “young child with unrealistic expectations”.

“I thought you could glide through the air like your dad: why should that bother you?”

“Not at this time of year: I can’t do fierce winds. Wing walking is no different. And I figured, since your body is more suited to the cold…”

“I’m not balancing on top of a biplane at my age”.

“Don’t you wanna get the same thrill and excitement the King got when he was your age, Lara-Su?” Tails suggested to her.

Lara-Su began to list multiple reasons why she would not stand on the wing, and Tails continued to try and convince her further, as Rotor just stood and listened.
As the debate raged on, Rotors senses caught wind of the carolers in the park. Rotor directed his full attention to the singers, as Lara-Su and Tails’ debate transitioned into a mild “blah-blah-blah…”

_

“This song… it happens to be a personal favorite of mine.”

Rotor was sure he could almost feel a warm touch on his hand.

“It tells the story of two friends who used to go traveling together. One day they became stranded in a fierce snowstorm while traveling back home through the mountains. They only had one blanket to keep them warm, only big enough for a single person to use.”

“The older of the two allowed his dear friend to have the blanket to himself so that he could keep warm. The youngest was reluctant to let his friend die for him, but the eldest insisted that he had lived a meaningful life, that he was ready to part ways with.”

“And so, the youngest kept himself shielded from the cold, while the eldest sat on the mountain peek and allowed himself to freeze to death. Once the storm had passed, the youngest cut the heart from his friend’s lifeless body. He buried it in the snow, and then he prayed to the great Aurora to make his heart one with the planet: the planet that he had spent his life loving.”

“Several days after the youngest had returned to his village, with his friends’ body to be put to rest: back on the mountain, a magnificent blossom tree had grown. It grew from the seed that was his heart. Within just a year, the tree had grown ever more until the entire mountain was nothing but a wonderland of greenery. From then on, whenever the youngest looked up from his village to the green hills overlooking, he had the comfort of knowing that his friend had truly started his life anew…”


“You know… I’d sacrifice a blanket for you”, Rotor spoke through his mind, to the familiar voice that he was hearing.

“That’s easy for you to say, blubber-boy” the voice had spoken in a comfy affectionate tone, which Rotor was very fond of.

_

“Then it’s settled!!”
“Huh!?”
“We’re taking the Tornado!!”
Rotor had returned from his daydream to learn that Tails had defeated Lara-Su in what could very well have qualified as being the debate of the century.

“How did you convince her?” Rotor laughed.

“He didn’t” Lara-Su’s face was comparable to that of Ixis Naugus on one of his bad days, “I was the one who convinced him to travel by public transportation. Then Harry called and told me the aircraft burnt out its engines…”

“I can live with that” Rotor said with delight at the thought of revisiting a relic of his youth, “but I’m still calling that back seat.”

“Okay, you win…” Lara-Su knew it was only logical, but she still dreaded it with every fiber of her being.

_

1 Year Ago:

After the unexpected events that had occurred not long before, Rotor was now en route to visit his dearly departed: as Lara-Su pushed him down the hallway in a wheelchair, being led by the nurse.

“If you wanted to get out of bed that badly…” Lara-Su said.

“My back hurts…”

“You brought it upon yourself…”

The group had wandered where emotion drains from the soul, where anyone can feel as dead as those who lay within. This place wasn’t as well lit as the blinding lights of the ward that Rotor had all to himself.
Lara-Su quivered as a discomforting chill slipped down her spine. The nurse seemed completely unfazed: of course, she must come and go from here all the time.

The thought of seeing the man he once loved, now a vessel no longer inhabited by a living core, was terrifying. As he was being wheeled through to the cold room where he laid lifeless, the idea of pushing Lara-Su out of the way and making a break for it back out the door had crossed Rotors mind, but his will was stronger.
The three of them halted, after coming up to a metal table where a sheet covered a body-sized assortment of lumps.

Lara-Su quivered. The nurse looked on sympathetically. Rotor knew what awaited him under that sheet: the last ever sight he will see again of his hearts desired…

“Can I… be alone?” Rotor said, having paused to clear his throat halfway.

Lara-Su respectfully stepped out of the door, followed by the nurse. The door closed behind them, slowly, but firmly.

Rotor wheeled himself to the head of the table, where a face lay obscured by the sheet. He reluctantly gripped the edge of the sheet, and after taking a moment to brace himself for the despair that he had been expecting, pulled the sheet down.

_

Part 2 coming soon.

Merry Christmas :D
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Re: So Much More...

Postby SimonSays » Sat Dec 24, 2011 9:04 pm

Ah, this is so good Panda! I said it before in the Creative Corner, but it bears repeating now: your writing style is wonderful and easy to get attached to. You set the mood of every scene really well, and the jumps between past and present flow well and work perfectly. You had me hooked by the end of the first section.

Now that there's more to the story than the flashback passage, I take back what I said about worrying about balance between action and description. I wasn't sure if the whole story would be built around that one scene or what, but now that I've read it in its proper context, I can see you've got the balance thing down. Staggering the tragic flashback scenes with the optimistic present-day scenes helps establish an overall feeling of melancholy and moving-on, knowing Cobar's fate in the past, and Rotor's current attempts at acceptance. The writing reflects Rotor's inner turmoil, and helps bring the story together. It feels tight, deliberate, and well-planned. The characters' personalities are spot-on, too. Honestly, there's not a whole lot of criticisms I can think of. Darn, now what will I do with all these rotten tomatoes if I can't throw them at you...?

Can't wait to read part 2 when it comes out! Look forward to seeing more from you. :D
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Re: So Much More...

Postby Werekitty119 » Mon Dec 26, 2011 9:16 pm

Simon, throw those tomatoes at me.

Panda, if that's one half of it, then you need to write a sequel.

And another. And another. THIS IS TOO AWESOME!!!!!
You won't recognise me. You won't realise it's me. You might not even know who I am. But the Kat came back, you thought I was a goner but the Kat came back, I just couldn't stay awayyyyy.....
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Re: So Much More...

Postby TheFatPanda » Thu May 03, 2012 6:11 pm

This was so hard to write. Writers block...writers block everywhere.

I'm extremely self-critical of this as is, so there's really no need to hold back. Give me your thoughts...

Now:

Angel Island was cold. The sky-bound chunk of earth, colder than the grounded city of New Mobotropolis that lies below.
Lara-Su was almost numbed from head to toe by the intense frost that came at her like a tidal wave whilst riding upon the wing of the Tornado. But she also bore enough adrenalin to take on the chill, leaving her in a limbo between hot and cold.

“That was the most thrilling experience I’ve ever had in my whole life!!” she squealed, “I’ve never felt so free, more free than gliding could ever allow me to feel!! Oh man, my heart is pumping so fast, I feel like I could do anything…”

“That’s what makes me nervous…” Rotor said with a short chuckle, coated with a slight topping of anxiety.

The group where walking through a quite countryside: only the faintest sounds of city life could be heard from the neon-lit city of Portal just beyond the trees. Everything that lay beyond in the other direction was for the most part of natures doing.

Just a little further on could the first small signs of something handcrafted be seen: a black metal archway, intertwined with overgrowth from the nearby plant life. The shaped bars above where formed to read out “Angels Rest”, the cemetery where Echidnas where laid to rest, and perhaps even brought forward into the afterlife by the great Aurora herself.

Rotor’s memory was transported back to the day of the funeral: on a day not like this one, but a day later down the line, where any remaining traces of snow had been reduced to tiny icebergs nestled in the moist grass.
As they walked under the entrance arch, Rotor’s bodily warmth had begun to fade. It was like the arch was a wormhole to another zone, one where the general laws of biology where a simple myth. He wasn’t the only one to feel this change: Lara-Su resumed folding her arms around her chest, and the fur of Tails’ tails had stood on end.
Down the further east end of the cemetery where the resting place of the Guardians lined with tombstones for Guardians past, some of which being ancestors to Lara-Su, not to mention her father.
Just a little further along was a secondary area, although a bit lower down in ranks to the guardians, was still considered prominent.

“Over there” Tails gestured towards that site. The group followed him as he led them onward.
This was the resting place for those whose service to the Guardians and to the well being of Angel Island and Mobius in general, had been recognized and honored.

Several tombs where propped around here in the same way. Shrines for members of the now disbanded Echidnaopolis and Albion High Councils where their, among several others.
The trio came to a halt, right in the centre of the graveyard, except for Rotor, who overtook Tails and Lara-Su, as he slowly approached a marble tombstone which still seemed relatively new.

With a deep breathe, Rotor crouched down beside the grave that the tombstone occupied, he placed a hand over the writing engraved and read out in his head what had been carved:

COBAR THE ECHIDNA

A Noble Man Recognized
For His Loyal Service to
The Guardian, the Kingdom
Of Acorn, And Above All
A dear Friend

May Aurora Guide His Soul


“Hey, honey…” Rotor whispered, his lip trembling slightly “Happy Solstice”.

______________

Two years ago (in another timeline):

The time had come. With Mobius only a matter of time away from collapsing under the pain of the space-time continuum, they knew there was only one hope left…
But what would this one hope bring, that is, if it where to even work: a seamless fix-it job or the end of the world as they know it?

A gentle screech caressed nearby eardrums, followed by the soothing sound of running water. In the bathroom, by the sink, an aged red echidna splashed the water over his face, as he tried to synch his mindset with what could potentially come next: trying to prepare for the worst, if the best was unachievable.
Behind him, Rotor peeked through the door.

“Hey… are you ready?” Rotor asked.

Cobar turned the handle back, stopping the water, before lifting his head up to watch himself in the mirror as he took a long deep breathe.

“Yep”.

Rotor backed away from the door as Cobar walked out.

“You scared?” Rotor asked again.

“A little…”

“Only a little?

“Is there really that much to be afraid of?” Cobar looked over at Rotor with a reassuring glint in his eye. “We’re leaving it up to the King aren’t we? Even on the wrong side of 40, King Sonic has a knack for pulling off miracles. Considering your long history together, you should know that more than I do.”

“Even if the King does succeed… what if there are consequences?” Rotor countered the glint in Cobars eye with a black pupil of doubt. “The only way Sonic can fix this is by changing the past: that means the present may not come out of all this as the same world we’ve come to know…”

Cobar nods in agreement, “We could be in for another peaceful life, heck maybe one even more peaceful than this one. Or at the very worst, we could find ourselves in a world where Robotonik is still the dictator of Mobius”.

“And then what?”

“Then… we deal with it. Just like you and your friends did in the old days.”

Rotor began to slump, his head flopped down between his shoulders.

“That’s not all, is it?” Cobar asked, tilting his head downwards to regain eye-contact with the slouched Rotor.

“What if I lose you?” Rotor pulled his head up slightly, though avoiding eye contact. Suddenly Cobar grasped Rotors left hand, tightly, now prompting Rotor to look him straight in the eye.

“Then I’ll go to whatever length it takes to find you again. And it’ll take more than a meager time shift to make a liar of me!!”

The tension is cut when the communicator, sitting on the nearby sideboard, makes a beeping sound, vibrating across the surface. Rotor, being closest to it, picks it up and looks at the screen.

“It’s Knuckles: he says they’re ready”.

“Then how about we do it to it?”

After all the emotional tension, Rotor finally lets out a smile.
“That sounded corny even when Sonic used to say it…”

“I rather thought I did it justice, if I do say so myself”

The both of them chuckled mildly. Then, Cobar leaned in and gave Rote a warm, affectionate kiss on the cheek. His cheeks glowed a pale red, as Rotors mind had been put at ease.

Cobar pulls away slowly.

“Let’s go” he says.

“Right behind you” Rotor responds eagerly.

______________

Now:

Everything was now pitch-black. At a reasonable distance away from Portal, only the full moon could provide just a faint glimmer to keep ones vision barely in working order.
The shimmer of the fairly new gravestone was still visible under this light, as Rotor simply kneeled beside the grave in silence, reading the engraving to himself, over and over again in his mind.

“Rote…?”

Rotor glanced over his shoulder at the sound of Tails voice. Tails noticed a tiny shimmer of something wet, lying in Rotors bottom eyelid, a split second before he simply blinked it away.

Tails was suddenly at a loss as to what to say next.

“It still hasn’t sunk in yet” Rotor said, “after all this time.”

“It will” Tails responded.

“Tails…” Rotor looked Tails directly in the eye, “I feel trapped…”

“What do you mean?” Tails crouched down beside him.

“It’s this timeline. It’s nice, now that everything is peaceful again. But... I wish I could be a part of it.”

“You are, aren’t you?”

“My body may be here, but my heart is still there: where I had undeniable proof that everything was real…”

“I’m not sure I follow you”.

“Cobar practically never existed here” Rotor clenched his eyes shut, to hold back any leakage, “everything about him, everything belonging to him, proof that he was a real person: all of it. It’s gone. All I have to remember him by… is this”

They both looked at the tombstone.

“That’s the thing, Rotor” Lara-Su had butted in, “Cobar isn’t in the ground here: that’s just what they want you to think” she chuckled a little, “He’s in here” Lara-Su pressed her hand against her own chest.

“That’s what hurts the most” Rotor says, all hope drained from his voice.

Lara-Su crouches down between the two men, and leans on Rotor comfortingly.

“I care deeply for Cobar, that’s never going to change. But having his memory laid permanently across my heart like a blanket… sometimes, I wonder if I can go on… to the point where I feel I just want to escape. But I can’t. That’s why I envy you Tails…”

“Why me?”

“You have a means of escape: the only thing keeping you bound to how things used to be is that armband. All you need is to slip it off when things just fail to synch up, and you can abandon your old life.”

At this moment, Tails instinctively stroked the metal band on his right arm: his anchor.

“I could…” Tails gets up off his bottom and onto his knees, “…but would I?”

In all the sadness, in all the sorrow, Rotor forgets just how much easier Tails has it than he does.

“It’s not like the thought hasn’t crossed my mind sometimes: if I where to break this armband right now, just to see what my life would become, just out of curiosity, I’d be risking so much. If I change my life, what would become of Mina and the kids? Would they be apart of my life anymore?”

“But you wouldn’t feel it, would you?” the very thought begins to make Rotor teary eyed again: even if you had no memory of it, like it never happened, the very idea of losing that memory would be soul crushing.

“The Queen felt it” Tails sat on his bottom again, this time nudging in closer, as the cold set in ever more, “she could feel the big gaping hole were Sonic should’ve been, for all that time she was married to Shadow”.

“The hole will always be there. Not even a time shift can take it away. You may not realize it, but you’ll always be feeling it. Love is just that powerful”.

“You sound like a fortune cookie” Tails said, followed by a hearty laughter.

______________

Just over a year ago:

It was almost as dark as it was in the present. But the moon was not hovering over the Mobian atmosphere, the sunlight, what little of it could surpass the silver clouds, was shut out by 4 cold stone walls.

Rotor stared down at the damp ground just beyond his round belly, constantly hearing a herd of persistent dripping sounds in the far corners, accompanied by the occasional clanking of metal as he moved as little as he could to make himself as comfortable as possible. He wanted ever so desperately to take the weight off his feet, but he feared his body mass would snap his arms clear from his sockets if he where to put so much weight on the chains that shackled him to the wall over his head.
This couldn’t be doing any good for his back…

Rotor heard a quiet moan following another clank on his left: it was Cobar, in the same predicament.

“Looks like we’re enduring the worst case scenario, old man” Rotor said.

Cobar mildly laughed off Rotor’s playful insult “Well, on the bright side, I won’t have to go looking for you now, will I? We’re still together.”

“I’d rather we where apart… then maybe you’d be in a safer place”.

“I could be. Or I could be shackled to a wall, in a dark dungeon on the other side of the planet. There’s no knowing where safety is anymore.”

Rotor lent his neck down to get a better look at Cobar, past his raised arms.

“Though if I could choose exactly where that would be, I have always wanted to see the Dragon Kingdom…”

Cobars attempt at lightening the mood barely succeeded: although Rotor couldn’t help but snigger, he still looked noticeably horrified at Cobars condition.

The elderly echidna looked homeless: his robe tattered, ripped apart, and smothered in dirt and even some of his own blood, his arms twitching in pain, as the steel chains caused his arthritis to act up.

Cobar was looking just as saddened at Rotors own condition. Rotor also bore tattered robes, several parts of his body covered in wounds, his belly reduced by several inches due to not eating in days, and what felt like a chipped tusk.

“Is there any hope we can cling to?” Rotor asked.

“Not for our sake. I only had the briefest of times to learn what I could about this new world: it appears King Sonics actions have brought about, as you say, the worst case scenario. After King Sonic disappeared during the final defeat of Doctor Robotnik, Shadow the Hedgehog took the throne in his place, and the absence of a positive influence like Sonic led the new King to a life of corruption, with the whole kingdom taking the brunt of his aggression”, Cobar finished by letting out a loud, raspy cough.

Rotor was lost for words. All he could muster from his dried lips was a quiet “How…?” But he was more worried about the state of his partner: he was sure that if it weren’t for the shackles, the elderly echidna would not even be able to stand.

“We have to get you out of here” Rotor said as the shakiness of his voice increased.

“I’m fine” Cobar said, followed by another loud cough, stripping him of his breathe.

Watching Cobar breathing heavily, trying so desperately to draw back in the air he’d lost was like watching somebody die right in front of him. No matter what he said, Cobar was clearly in agonizing pain, and Rotor couldn’t take it. Wanting so desperately to help the poor man, Rotor began jerking at his chains with great desperation: he knew they were never going to break, but the desire to save his lover forced him to claw at even the most impossible of odds, leaving the walrus to grow increasingly angry at his situation as the clanking metal simply mocked his efforts.

“There’s no need for that…” Cobar interjected.

Rotor stopped, his face red with anguish, his lungs working just as hard as Cobars.

Suddenly, Rotor could hear a voice outside: the voice of a woman.

“The older one? Whatever…” this was just about all Rotor’s ears could make out, before the dungeon door unlocked with a loud click and clank, and in walked the feisty female echidna Lien-Da, the chief enforcer to King Shadow. She left the door slightly ajar as she entered, before strutting towards Cobar in a manner of promiscuousness.

“So, are you gonna spill the beans...handsome?” Lien-Da said as she placed her hand on Cobars beard, as Rotor recoiled at the creepy sight before him.
Cobar only glared directly into her eyes, causing her to back off, “Right, I forgot you don’t go that way…” she said in a patronizing tone.

“You’re also too old for me” Cobar mocked, “I see your making good use of my gift, the one you forced out of me…” he gestured toward the spatial armband attached Lien-Da’s arm, the one he was forced to create for her.

“And I’m very grateful”, Lien-Da reached over his head and began to unlock his shackles, “too bad I’m not that grateful”.

The first hand fell to his side. Rotor could see a hint of determination in Cobars eye. As if he wanted to make a swift move and use his free hand to remove or destroy Lien-Da’s armband while she was preoccupied with the other lock. On the contrary…

“OOMPH!!”

The other hand was freed, and Rotors fear had been confirmed: gravity pulled Cobar to the ground with a hard thud, while Lien-Da laughed on hysterically, before grabbing him by his robes and pulling him up.

“Don’t have a heart attack, tubby” Lien-Da snarled at Rotor gleefully, upon seeing his body shaking in fear.
“You have an appointment with the king” Lien-Da hissed in Cobars ear. She dragged him away.

Rotor felt a lump clog his throat as he feared the worst was yet to come. As if by instinct, he quietly, but audibly uttered the words “I love you” in Cobars direction. He caught a brief glimpse of Cobar mouthing the words “I love you too” before he disappeared behind the door. It closed, the lock clicked shut. Rotor was alone.

The following hours felt like centuries. Time passed painfully slow, as Rotor remained in that dark dungeon, as the captive audience to the most unbearable of sounds. His face was on fire, stinging from his own tears, unable to breathe from the lump gagging him.

The worst part of all was when the sounds stopped...as did Cobars heart, and for a moment, so did Rotors…

______________

Now:

The trio sat in silence, in the dark, in the cold. Rotor stared at the gravestone with great intensity, while Tails and Lara-Su looked on.

“It’s…getting pretty late…” Lara-Su huddled into Tails.

Rotor only mildly heard what she’d said, as his mind was still focused heavily on the gravestone.
Suddenly, something small and white floated down past Rotors face, and for the first time in less than an hour, Rotor finally moved his head away from the gravestone and up to the sky, where he saw a winter splendor: a gentle snowfall had began, progressing to recoat the ground with a fresh layer of white.

Rotors eyes became watery once again, and yet, he couldn’t help but smile.

“You know something, Tails?”

Tails gave Rotor his attention.

“I hope Shadow returns someday…”

“What…why would you…?”

“So he can see for himself how much better off this world is under King Sonics guidance”.

Tails shock melted away, as he nodded in agreement.

Rotor turned his attention back to Cobars tombstone, this time stroking the ground at the foot of it, where he lay.

“If only you could see it too…”

A single droplet fell from Rotors cheek and soaked into the soil.

“Thanks…for the blanket”.

He got onto the ground and laid his head against the dirt. It was cold, and yet, Cobars close presence made him warm.

“Thank you, Cobar, for being so much more than a friend. I will never stop loving you”.

Rotor pushed himself up back onto his knees. Tails and Lara-Su’s expressions where bittersweet, Tails knew that Rotor had finally found peace.

“Hey, let’s go home” Rotor said, after wiping his eye for the final time.



“Hey, Rotor, you know that if Shadow does come back, he’ll have me to deal with, right?” Lara-Su exclaimed boastfully.

“Oh that, I was bluffing before” Rotor laughed “I would never wish…”

“Of course” Tails said, silencing him, “So, do you have any plans for the 365th day?”

“I never have plans these days”.

“Mina and I would be very happy if you joined us for Solstice supper”.

“That sounds…delightful, my friend”.

“I wish I could come.” Lara-Su interjected “I feel stuffed just thinking about Mrs. Prowers cooking…”

“You and your parents are welcome to join us”

“I’ll run it by dad”.



The snow continued to fall slowly and gently. The ground had been coated with a brand-spanking new layer of snow before the old blanket could even think about melting away. The trio exited the cemetery, and Rotor felt a whole lot warmer than he did when they went in.

“So Rotor…you ever thought about finding somebody else?” Lara-Su smirked.

Rotor simply grinned. “One step at a time, Lara-Su, one step at a time…”
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