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And here's the pitch... Your Archie StH comic ideas!

Postby Tokaro » Wed Aug 24, 2011 11:08 am

Hey everyone, Tokaro here!

So, lets say that our mutual pal and benevolent BumbleKing said , "Hey random Bumblechump, Archie said that I can make one of you the new head writer via the powers of magic and transmogrification of space and time. I, Ian Flynn tire of the fantastical job that is writing Sonic the Hedgehog after becoming independently wealthy somehow. Like Steve Rogers to Bucky Barnes, I pass the shield down to you just so you can die after a year and I can take up the mantle again because that's what the "readers" want."

This is it folks, your hypothetical opportunity to tell the stories that you've always wanted to! The Marine Saga! Nerbs 3: Dark of the Nerbs! Your artsy story about the rise of the House of Ivo. A recounting of The Great war from a soldiers eyes. Sonic gets turned into a nerb! Sleuth Dog & Deadpool! Whatever, you want to do before you eventually get fired for your gross incompeten-- I mean, until you realize you're too real for Archie Comics! If you ever had an idea for a Sonic story and you feel like sharing, feel free.

Ok, I'll go first

SONIC THE HEDGEHOG #XX1
"Brink ": Eggman's tyranny has had an impact on all of Mobius' inhabitants at one time or another. This story is about Amy Rose trying to find herself and find out more about her parents who fell victim to the Roboticizer all those years ago. Amy does some skulking into her family history, asking Rob and at the same time two weary travellers come to Mobius. They claim that they're looking for their daughter Amy! Could they be Amy's long lost parents? How's that even possible. This all seems fishy to Sonic and the rest of the Freedom Fighters. Somethings may not be what they seem...
Script: Tyler Clarke

SONIC THE HEDGEHOG #XX2
"Underground ": The effects of Sally's death are still felt across Mobius to this day. Many considering the culmination of events "The Day Freedom Died". On the outskirts of the desert beyond the ruins of old Robotropolis hides a community who mean to stop Eggman by any means necessary. They are outspoken and outnumbered by the Eggman Empire but they prepare to face Eggman on his own turf, and refuse to ally themselves with The Freedom Fighters. Can Sonic and the FF reason with these radicals and get them on the right track or are they going to jump off the proverbial cliff for what they consider to be true Freedom?
Script: Tyler Clarke

SONIC UNIVERSE #XX1
"Mina Mongoose: Showtime":Mina Mongoose and The Forget Me Knots are living the dream but what if the dream is jeopardized? Dark Legion members trying to destroy Mina's concert? The biggest slump of the bands career? A new artist swoops into town ready to rock the show and make Mina's old faithfuls forget all about the forget me knots! A 4-part story about Music, Mobians and a message.
Script: Tyler Clarke

SONIC UNIVERSE #XX2
"The Marine Adventure":That's right! It's the STREWTH! Get ready for high sailing, swashbuckling, cannon ball force and jet-ski speed action like nothing you've ever seen before. Eggman Nega is at it again, using a special siphoning device to try and harness the power of the stars for his evil machinations. And the only one who can stop him and his Robotic Legions is...MARINE!? Setting off on her trusty ship she sets forth to stop this dreaded villain and make Blaze proud.
Script: Tyler Clarke
Script: Tyler Clarke
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Re: And here's the pitch... Your Archie StH comic ideas!

Postby The Coolness » Wed Aug 24, 2011 11:40 am

Tokaro wrote:Hey everyone, Tokaro here!

*Stuff Ian can't use now*

I don't mean to be mean, but if you post story ideas here, unless I'm mistaken, Ian can't use it.

Edit Nevermind just realized it's in Kreative Korner sorry.
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Re: And here's the pitch... Your Archie StH comic ideas!

Postby Ultimate » Wed Aug 24, 2011 11:41 am

90'scoolness wrote:
Tokaro wrote:Hey everyone, Tokaro here!

*Stuff Ian can't use now*

I don't mean to be mean, but if you post story ideas here, unless I'm mistaken, Ian can't use it.

Ian doesn't come by the kreative korner. Isn't that obvious? It's full of original story ideas. So the stories are safe.

Sonic 232: "The enemy of my enemy..." Sonic and the Freedom Fighters are still reeling from Sally's death, but they must pull themselves together because a force from yesteryear has returned, and they and Eggman must team up to stop the Nerbifization of the world! "Life goes on" A young mobian is strongly affected by the death of Sally; will she learn to accept death, and move on with life?
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Re: And here's the pitch... Your Archie StH comic ideas!

Postby The Coolness » Wed Aug 24, 2011 11:43 am

Ultimate wrote:
90'scoolness wrote:
Tokaro wrote:Hey everyone, Tokaro here!

*Stuff Ian can't use now*

I don't mean to be mean, but if you post story ideas here, unless I'm mistaken, Ian can't use it.

Ian doesn't come by the kreative korner. Isn't that obvious? It's full of original story ideas. So the stories are safe.

Check my edit, I forgot I was in Kreative Korner when I said that.
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Re: And here's the pitch... Your Archie StH comic ideas!

Postby Zar » Wed Aug 24, 2011 12:00 pm

Sonic the Hedgehog #300:
Eggman has finally won. Total control over the planet. After Sonic the Hedgehog 230, he brought back his robotizcer. Using the power of that, he implemented it into the Death Egg, and now the planet has been entirely Robotizced. At least, so Eggman thought. While the leading Freedom Fighters, the Prime Freedom Fighters, have been Robotizced... there is still hope. The other Freedom Fighter teams across Mobius have survived, and must now join their forces to defeat Eggman once and for all. But can they do it in time? While they attempt to defeat Eggman, he has been preparing his Cross-Zone Ahnilator. This allows Eggman to Roboticze all of the zones! The Freedom Fighters must defeat Eggman once and for all. Led by none other than... Bivalve. The world has never seen such a lazy leader.

Cover by Ben Bates, Tracy Yardley!, Jamal Peppers.
Script: TBA
Pencils: Spaz, Tracy Yardley!, Ben Bates, Jamal Peppers, Dawn Best, Scott Shaw, Ron Lim, Jon Gray, Steven Butler, James Fry.
Colors: Matt Herms, Jason Jenson, Steve Downer, Ray Dillon, Kyle Hunter, Frank Gagliardo
Letters: TBA
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Re: And here's the pitch... Your Archie StH comic ideas!

Postby The Shadow Emperor » Wed Aug 24, 2011 12:11 pm

SONIC THE HEDGEHOG #XX1
"Picking Up the Pieces"--Finally, the Death Egg has been destroyed and New Mobotropolis saved. Sonic and Sally reconcile their friendship and the Freedom Fighters have time to relax. But will Eggman's forces remain quiet, or are they simply biding their time?
Script: The Shadow Emperor
Pencils: Steven Butler

SONIC THE HEDGEHOG #XX2
"Back to Basics": Lien-Da and her Dark Egg Legion have returned to New Mobotropolis! But they're not there for a fight instead, the Grandmaster has come to propose an alliance! What could have possibly motivated the villainess to seek help from her greatest foes? Only one way to find out!
Script: The Shadow Emperor
Pencils: Jamal Peppers

SONIC THE HEDGEHOG #XX3
"Fallen Angel"--Part I: The Freedom Fighters have been summoned to Angel Island by the Chaotix for assistance. A sinister group on the island has arrived to cause trouble and only a team-up between the two Freedom Fighter groups can save them. But will it be enough to stop the invaders? Ties in with SONIC UNIVERSE #XX3!
Script: The Shadow Emperor
Pencils: Ben Bates

SONIC THE HEDGEHOG #XX4
"Fallen Angel"--Part II: With the Master Emerald stolen, Angel Island has fallen. The Freedom Fighters have been separated from the Chaotix and are surrounded by hordes of Marauders, and all hope is lost. But with some unexpected allies, perhaps they can turn the tide against the evil soldiers! Ties in with SONIC UNIVERSE #XX4!
Script: The Shadow Emperor
Pencils: Ben Bates

SONIC UNIVERSE #XX1
"Twilight Troubles"--Part I: With Dr. Eggman defeated and in hiding, Knuckles the Echidna finally has a chance to relax back home. Or does he? A strange new menace has begun lurking in the shadows of Angel Island, and it's up to Rad Red and his best buds to find out what's going on.
Script: The Shadow Emperor
Pencils: Tracy Yardley!

SONIC UNIVERSE #XX2
"Twilight Troubles"--Part II: While investigating the disturbance to the peace on Angel Island, Knuckles the Echidna has vanished! The Chaotix must overcome their shock and work together to find out the truth behind their friend's disappearance, but things may not be what they seem...
Script: The Shadow Emperor
Pencils: Tracy Yardley!

SONIC UNIVERSE #XX3
"Twilight Troubles"--Part III: The Marauders are ready to make their next move! The Freedom Fighters have been called to help deal with this new threat, but will the Chaotix manage to hold the fort waiting for help to arrive? And if that weren't enough, a deadly villain from Knuckles' past arrives to wreak havoc! Ties in with SONIC THE HEDGEHOG #XX3!
Script: The Shadow Emperor
Pencils: Tracy Yardley!

SONIC UNIVERSE #XX4
"Twilight Troubles"--Part IV: With aid from the malevolent Dr. Finitevus, the Marauders have succeeded in taking the Master Emerald, sending Angel Island crashing into the sea below. With the Freedom Fighters missing and the Chaotix reeling from defeat, Dimitri and Julie-Su make a stunning reveal about the invaders! Ties in with SONIC THE HEDGEHOG #XX4!
Script: The Shadow Emperor
Pencils: Tracy Yardley!
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Re: And here's the pitch... Your Archie StH comic ideas!

Postby Speedlion » Wed Aug 24, 2011 1:25 pm

Archie Sonic the Hedgehog Issue #1225

Title: Thousand year after her death

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Seriously, though... I've got to think about this a bit... will be back with awesome ideas!
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Re: And here's the pitch... Your Archie StH comic ideas!

Postby Rick » Wed Aug 24, 2011 1:36 pm

All I can say is, get ready for Kawa Crossing to actually become comic canon. :P

A man can dream though. A man can dream...
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Re: And here's the pitch... Your Archie StH comic ideas!

Postby Godzillabrawler » Wed Aug 24, 2011 2:27 pm

SONIC UNIVERSE #XX
"Destroy All Monsters" Part One: Blaze the cat has received a vision to lead her to the next Sol Emerald. When she finds the emerald, a rogue Metal Sonic snatches it and unleashes the mutated freedom fighter monsters upon her! Can Blaze take on Sonikaiju and Knuxirus by herself? Or will she be crushed by the mighty monsters?
Script: Henry S. and Ian Flynn
Art: Tracy Yardley!, Jim Amash, Phil Felix, and Ray Dillon
Cover by Tracy Yardley! and Ben Huneker, with Matt Frank
32-page, full color comic
$2.99 US


SONIC UNIVERSE #XX
"Destroy All Monsters" Part Two: Blaze has been saved by the battle commandos of Team Dark, Sting the Bee and Col. Shadow. Metazaki unleashes more monsters against the city, and Mayor Kintobor is unable to power up the Robotno! Blaze gains control of herself and blasts through monster territory to help save the city.
Script: Henry S. and Ian Flynn
Art: Tracy Yardley!, Jim Amash, Phil Felix, and Ray Dillon
Cover by Tracy Yardley!, Jim Amash, and Ben Huneker
32-page, full color comic
$2.99 US


SONIC UNIVERSE #XX
"Destroy All Monsters" Part Three: The Giant Robotno has been charged, and Sting and Blaze take the fight to the kaiju. Metazaki unleashes an unexpected trick, almost costing the fight. When the Robotno goes down, Blaze challenges Metazaki to one final battle- for the fate of Kintopolis!
Script: Henry S. and Ian Flynn
Art: Tracy Yardley!, Jim Amash, Phil Felix, and Ray Dillon
Cover by Tracy Yardley! and Ben Huneker, with Matt Frank
32-page, full color comic
$2.99 US


SONIC UNIVERSE #XX
"Destroy All Monsters" Part Four: Metazaki has transformed into a massive dragonoid robot to wipe out Kintopolis. Sting and Colonel Shadow are scrambling to evacuate the city, and Blaze is on her toes with King Metadorah and can’t spare to lose the Sol Emerald! Don’t miss the action-packed conclusion of DESTROY ALL MONSTERS!
Script: Henry S. and Ian Flynn
Art: Tracy Yardley!, Jim Amash, Phil Felix, and Ray Dillon
Cover by Tracy Yardley! and Ben Huneker, with Matt Frank
32-page, full color comic
$2.99 US


SONIC UNIVERSE #XX
"Space Revelations" Part One: Tails and Rotor have finished building the new space vehicle, the Space Typhoon! As if on cue, the two receive an S.O.S. from an unknown alien planet and set off to help. When the ship crashes from alien gunfire, Tails discovers a mysterious girl!
Script: Henry S. and Ian Flynn
Art: Tracy Yardley!, Jim Amash, Phil Felix, and Steve Downer
Cover by Tracy Yardley! and Ben Huneker
32-page, full color comic
$2.99 US


SONIC UNIVERSE #XX
"Space Revelations" Part Two: Who is Cosmo? And who were those gunships from? It’s a race against time as Tails, Rotor, and Cosmo must escape the forces of the Black Arms! Tails can’t answer all the questions, and he’s running out of time! Exciting revelations happen this issue.
Script: Henry S. and Ian Flynn
Art: Tracy Yardley!, Jim Amash, Phil Felix, and Steve Downer
Cover by Tracy Yardley! and Ben Huneker
32-page, full color comic
$2.99 US


SONIC UNIVERSE #XX
"Space Revelations" Part Three: Using heavy fire, Black Doom’s forces have destroyed the outer Seedrian defense line. Tails is so focused on talking to Cosmo, he can’t get a grip on what’s happening! When Cosmo and her sister are captured, it’s up to the smart guys to get them back. It’s mobians versus monsters as Tails takes on the Black Bull!
Script: Henry S. and Ian Flynn
Art: Tracy Yardley!, Jim Amash, Phil Felix, and Steve Downer
Cover by Tracy Yardley! and Ben Huneker
32-page, full color comic
$2.99 US


SONIC UNIVERSE #XX
"Space Revelations" Part Four: The combined might of Tails, T-Pup, and Rotor’s mechanical suit is not enough to stop the Black Bull! As the tides shift in Doom’s favor, Tails must figure out how to take him down. Tails and Rotor almost lose- but not before Cosmo makes the ultimate sacrifice.
Script: Henry S. and Ian Flynn
Art: Tracy Yardley!, Jim Amash, Phil Felix, and Steve Downer
Cover by Tracy Yardley! and Ben Huneker
32-page, full color comic
$2.99 US


SONIC UNIVERSE #XX
"A New Future" Part One: It’s a return to Mobius: 30 Years Later! This isn’t the same future though, as we jump into a brand new setting. Ixis Naugus, highest priest of the Order of Mephiles, is making a push to take over Babylon Metro. King Khan can’t spare any soldiers. Who else can he turn to but Sonic the Hedgehog?
Script: Henry S. and Ian Flynn
Art: Tracy Yardley!, Jim Amash, Phil Felix, and Steve Downer
Cover by Tracy Yardley! and Ben Huneker
32-page, full color comic
$2.99 US


SONIC UNIVERSE #XX
"A New Future" Part Two: Sonic the Hedgehog and his wife Amy Rose are enjoying a vacation with their kids, but find that King Ken and Queen Sally Khan need his help to stop the Order of Mephiles. Only by teaming up with the Prowers and Jet, president of the Babylon Nation, can he take on the gruesome wizards of the Order.
Script: Henry S. and Ian Flynn
Art: Tracy Yardley!, Jim Amash, Phil Felix, and Steve Downer
Cover by Tracy Yardley! and Ben Huneker
32-page, full color comic
$2.99 US


SONIC UNIVERSE #XX
"A New Future" Part Three: Sonic and his kids have watched Jet fall to Rutan, a powerful wizard leading the Babylon Onslaught. Sonic and his kids are not making any progress, and Amy, Tails, Cream, and the Prower girls are captured! Could Sonic possibly save the day? And how can Storm help them out?
Script: Henry S. and Ian Flynn
Art: Tracy Yardley!, Jim Amash, Phil Felix, and Steve Downer
Cover by Tracy Yardley! and Ben Huneker
32-page, full color comic
$2.99 US


SONIC UNIVERSE #XX
"A New Future" Part Four: Storm has decided to help Sonic, Rush, and Lily take on Rutan. With the power of the Iblis Scepter, Rutan is unstoppable- but when Storm reveals his wizardry skills, Sonic is able to help take him down. The future hangs in the balance as Sonic and Rutan battle for ultimate supremacy!
Script: Henry S. and Ian Flynn
Art: Tracy Yardley!, Jim Amash, Phil Felix, and Steve Downer
Cover by Tracy Yardley! and Matt Herms
32-page, full color comic
$2.99 US


Whaddya think?
EDIT: Added Two More 4-Parters
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Re: And here's the pitch... Your Archie StH comic ideas!

Postby squeakyboots13 » Wed Aug 24, 2011 2:56 pm

This was inevitable.
SONIC THE HEDGEHOG #250
"The Return of the Nerbs": During Sonic's final showdown against El Gran Gordo, Larry Lynx discovers an ancient underground secret that was never meant to see the light of day ever again. It's the begining of a brand new saga lasting 317 issues!
Script: Jonathan Gray
Art: Jonathan Gray, Matt Herms
Cover by Jonathan Gray
Shipping Date: 2/30/13
On Sale at Comic Specialty Shops: 99/99/99
On Sale on Newsstands: 00/00/00
160-page, full color comic
$0.04 US
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Re: And here's the pitch... Your Archie StH comic ideas!

Postby Frostria » Wed Aug 24, 2011 3:58 pm

Shadow and amy :3 ..........all i wanna say
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Re: And here's the pitch... Your Archie StH comic ideas!

Postby The Bored » Thu Aug 25, 2011 10:41 pm

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Sonic the Hedgehog 2000

The Beginning of the End part 1

The Zone Cops have fallen.
Now Sonic must lead an army of Freedom Fighters against Eggman Nega's army of alternate Robotniks in a battle to decide the fate of the Multiverse.

script by w.b.

cover art by SPAZ

pencils by Spaz & Tracy Yardly

shiping date X/X/2XXX

32 page full color comic

price $2.99

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Re: And here's the pitch... Your Archie StH comic ideas!

Postby jkcool » Thu Aug 25, 2011 11:26 pm

Sorry, look below...
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Re: And here's the pitch... Your Archie StH comic ideas!

Postby jkcool » Thu Aug 25, 2011 11:39 pm

Sorry, look below...
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Re: And here's the pitch... Your Archie StH comic ideas!

Postby jkcool » Fri Aug 26, 2011 1:10 am

Sonic the hedgehog #1000

Turning Point: Mobius, a desolate place where few mobians remain. For 15 years Sonic has face his worst fear, his fiercest enemy (his furriest enemy), but now has lead to his demise. Everything you know will change...

In a world overrun by Big and his army of clones, only one frog can stand up to the tyranny of such gigantic proportions. One half frog, half cyborg that can rise for the freedom of amphibians everywhere: FroggyX360gamabetajuniorII. Picking right off from #950 ("I'll be back").

Written by: The floating head of Ian
Drawn by: The floating head of Tracy (who somehow can still draw)
Nerbs insertion: A man with nothing to lose.

Coming to Comic book shops 3/31/2075

This is too BIG to miss!


...

Sonic #231

Sally is almost dead. Sonic is losing hope. With no other options to turn to, he makes one last attempt to save his love's life. The change you never saw coming. A meeting with the evil witch doctor Deviously Uprepared But Superawesome. Prepare yourself... for SALLY... THE NERBETTE.

Written by: Ian (no, of course no one has threatened him unless he puts out this issue)
Draw by: A masked figure who sometimes wears a funky cool shadow hat.

...

Sonic the hedgehog #666

Sonic has gone bad with power. He has already killed his beloved pet Muttski, and mutated him with Tails' second Tail, but this time he has gone too far. Witness the creation that has shocked/scared/commatized readers everywhere for fifty straight years. His return will be marked with another dreaded foe. No one can be prepared, no one can be safe, no once can hide. A combination sewed together by pure evil. Watch out, when the mutant Tommythorndyke goes on his killing spree. Get ready for the blood... coming out of your heart... as this comic tears it out of you... for destroying every moral and sacred standard this comic once had.

Written by: "Many Hands"

6/66/66


Sonic the hedgehog: Terminated!

When a little prank goes to far, one hog is strapped to just a few lone tubes on life support. Sonic the hedgehog: hero, savoir, blue, adjective, and other stuff is now clinging onto his own life. How could this have happened? Where did he go wrong? And why did he try to inject chili dog serum into his veins? All these answers and more will be answered over the course of a 100 arc saga. Plus, watch the return of skinny Eggman. Where did all that fat go?


Edit: Sorry for the triple thread, I'll just put them together.
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